Ninety-three degrees.
So humid that water drips
Off my glass in streams.
I looked at it today, and just thought it flowed better this way.
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I liked Take 1 better. I don't really know why.
ReplyDeleteJust to balance the score, I thing Take flows better--and I typed that word before checking at your own comment, John.
ReplyDeleteAnd passing along a comment from Michelle Darnay:
ReplyDelete"John, I still can't seem to comment on your blog although I managed to set myself up as a follower... the mysteries of google.
So here's my comment : Take one or Take two, all I know is there's a lot of swillin' in the heat going on, day after day..."
P.S. Michelle, I'm not sure what the problem is. As long as you're signed in to Blogger/Google you should be able to comment without any trouble. You might want to check to be sure that you're signed in.